I look out of my daughter’s bedroom window – a habit I have acquired before I go to bed. The room is unoccupied for most of the time – drying laundry and empty boxes reside there these days. A large moon hangs in the cloud-breaking sky, directly opposite our house – glowing its other worldly white light through an oak tree. I quickly grab my phone and rush down the stairs, slip on some shoes and creep out of the house into our front garden. I feel strangely furtive snapping the sky in the dark. Gutters drip from the recent downpours. Only a few hours ago an arching rainbow glowed its magic in the same portion of sky where the moon is now centre stage. Clouds muffle the edges of the moon and a faint orange-hued corona surrounds it.
All I had to do was look out of the window. My daughter would have enjoyed it.
Prisms in the day
White light in the dripping dark
Hold me in their sway
Frank Tassone at dVerse Poets is hosting Haibun Monday (https://dversepoets.com/2021/05/24/haibun-monday-5-24-21-flower-moon/). Read the link and the wonderful responses from poets on the link.
I, too, have furtively gone outside for photos of the moon. Excellent write!
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😊 Thank you.
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I really love what you did with this prompt. Your haiku is a wonderful ending to the haibun. Your images are wonderful. … other worldly white light… prisms and white light…
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Thank you so much.
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I especially love your description of the moon with its orange-hued corona. Very pretty haiku too.
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Thank you. It was a strange sight tbh.
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Really beautiful, especially the haiku
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Aah, thank you Kate 🙂
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Strangely enough, one of the best views of the moon is from our spare room, which is full of junk before we get to work on it and prepare it for a visit from my grandson in November. I love the way you captured the moon ‘glowing its other worldly white light through an oak tree’ and the atmospheric gutters dripping from the recent downpours.
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Thank you Kim. There is something wistful and sad about rooms that are no longer used all the time …
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Wonderfully touching prose and excellent haiku!
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Thank you Rob 🙂
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I feel the absence of your daughter in this piece, and the fact you state, she ‘would have enjoyed it.’ It sounds like an enchanting moment nevertheless!
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Yes, it was a beautiful sight. I will be seeing my daughter in a few days’ time – yay!!! – and will show her my photos.
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Glad to hear it 😊
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Outstanding transition from rainbow to moonlight, from empty bedroom to garden. Fine work with an excellent haiku closer.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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An enchanted experience made whole by your excellent haiku!
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Thank you – so pleased you enjoyed it 🙂
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I hope your daughter enjoyed the moon wherever she was. The last line of the prose was poignant.
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I shall remind her to have a look out for it on Wednesday – fingers crossed for a clear sky 🙂
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🙂
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I like the imagery that the prism calls to mind; well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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I love what you told without telling it… the sense of an empty nest, and yet there is the moon you wish you could share.
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Thank you Bjorn 😊
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