We’ll be as equals, you and I
Flooding our joy across the sky.
A stream of never ending light,
millennia behold the sight
of harvest day then harvest night,
bear witness to our cosmic sign.
Shine bright my love, no more forlorn,
reflect my fire upon your orb,
dusted beauty until the dawn
when passion wanes into sunrise.
The moon has been spectacular over these past few nights, rewarding my insomnia with the sight of my garden washed in its full white light. It was the Autumn Equinox on Wednesday, so when Grace’s prompt to write a Zéjel, which is a centuries old poetry form, clicked into my inbox, I had to give it a try inspired by this celestial phenomenom.
See Grace’s background to the Zéjel and read some wonderful versions at this link :https://dversepoets.com/2021/09/23/poetry-form-zejel/#comment-311196
Wonderful homage to the Equinox! The form lends itself well to the tone. Great writ.
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Thanks Ron. Its always interesting to try out different forms – this one brought out a rather archaic approach. 😊
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Great moon shot, Marion. You’ve captured the “equality” of the equinox very well in your poem.
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Thanks Lisa. I’ve been taking shots all week, but this one came out the best.
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A spectacular sight of the moon it is. It is just timely with the autumn equinox. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you for the prompt Grace 😊
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Love your moonshot, Marion! Good to have a collection of pics. Never know when it comes in handy!
Hank
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Thank you Hank. My phone is stuffed with photos.
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Lovely poem ❤
Same moon here, different equinox. 🙂
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Thank you Kate 😊
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Marion,
What a delight to read: a Zejel love song of the sun to the autumn moon that rides effortlessly on waves of passion and rhyme. Gorgeous.
pax,
dora
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Thank you Dora. So pleased you liked it 😊
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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That’s s a wonderful shot and a beautiful verse!
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Thank you so much 😊
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I love it… the spectacular autumn moon has such significance… I China there are moon cakes.
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Thank you Björn. Ooh, moon cakes. They sound interesting.
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