
You’re leaning slightly, skirts a-rustle,
Blowing dust at me.
Am I hungry for a story?
As hungry as can be.
Once promised in a sultry month,
you narrate with care,
your lines were freshly glowing white.
garlands perfumed the air.
You thought the bond was mutual,
pure bliss is what you saw,
’twas written and was deftly signed,
your love for evermore.
But evermore does not exist,
the glow recedes and wanes
with cracks and flakes and broken things.
A different smell pervades.
Care could soon restore my looks
You plead through shuttered eyes,
Unlock the beauty that’s within
And revel in the prize.
Linked to a great photo prompt from Carrie at The Sunday Muse Blogspot.
Sounds like the marriage and the house both fell into disrepair! Gppd write.
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Indeed!
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Thank you Bev.😊
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love the title, very creative. but i guess that’s why we buy a house, so we can grow old together… till gravity take us under. loved the phasing of this poem, very fresh. well done!
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Really appreciate your comments, thank you.
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I love this, especially the message in the last stanza. I watch a lot of home reno shows- what those people could do to this house!!!!
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Thank you Sherry. So pleased you liked it. And, yes, its amazing what effort and imagination can do!
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A beautiful poem Marion! Some things cannot be repaired and some things can. I love where the image took you.
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Thank you Carrie. A great photo yet again!
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Loss, decay and potential argue here vividly. Who knows which will prevail. I especially like the next to last stanza: “..cracks and flakes and broken things…” indeed.
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Thank you Joy. I like to think most things are worth saving. 😊
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Really cool take on a bond between house and resident.
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Thank you – I think there often is a strong bond.😊
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Love the way your poem flows … the gentle rhyme … the message.
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Thank you Helen. I struggle with rhyme, so I appreciate your comments.
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Nice one Marion. Want to add that yes love can be the lure in acquiring a home
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much💖love
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Thank you Gillena. 😊
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The “. . . evermore does not exist” message comes hard, we ‘payed’ for a lifetime warranty. Seems a little polish might rejuvenate. But that would be no help to me, I did not even recognize her after about 18 years. She was not the young lady of dreams that were in my mind.
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In my parents house they took the cupboards and pantry, and the bricks.
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The bricks?
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“Care could soon restore my looks
You plead through shuttered eyes,”
Marion, you make me care for this place. I’m sorry it’s fallen on hard times.
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Aah, thank you Lisa!
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I guess the marriage like the house fell into disrepair. Lovely poem.
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Thank you Myrna 😊. Some things can be repaired, sadly others not.
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Stellar last stanza!
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Thank you! 😊
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