There is a list upon my fridge, abbreviated notes and cues:
to add some brie, loo rolls too, a bag of spuds, but no more chopped tomatoes please.
And when the larder’s looking bare, stocks are low, and I’m wondering where the basics went,
I lift the magnet from the door and read the scrap of hurried swirls and tell myself,
these words are yours, its just today you’ve used them in a different way.
Shelves may look empty
But behind the stale biscuits
Is a fresh gateaux.
Linking this to d’Verse Poets Pub where Frank has charged us to write a Haibun about writer’s block. This isn’t strictly speaking a haibun as I’ve not used prose for the first section. It’s just the way it came out as I was writing.
They’re in there, just hiding, I like that idea, Marion. Sooner or later they will want to come out and play with your palate.
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Exactly! Thank you Lisa 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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A great haibun! I love the haiku… behind the stale is the fresh we are all looking for. Beautiful!!
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Thank you Dwight. 😊
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You are welcome!
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Beautiful cooking metaphor. I really enjoyed this analogy and the hope it gives to aspiring new chefs.
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Thank you. Pleased you liked it! 😊
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I like your haibun! Yes indeedy, one just needs to look behind the stale to find the fresh! 😀
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Thank you Carol ! 😊
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You have expressed quite wonderfully when words play hide and seek. Love it.
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Thank you Punam 😊
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You are welcome. 😊
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Ah yes we may just be thinking too must at the level of first glance, when there are the fresh new ideas in our mind waiting to be pulled forward. Luv it .
You nailed the prompt
Happy you dropped by my blog
Much💖love
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Thank you Gillena 😊
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Nice metaphor! There is always something hiding on the back shelves…:-)
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Absolutely!
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And… Marion with a metaphor for the win! ❤
Love it!
-David
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Thank you David ❤
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Perfect haiku as metaphor.
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Thank you 😊
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I love the metaphor… it worked so well. Sometimes you just have to look a little bit further and you will find something great. Just did my weekly shopping so I wonder what I have forgotten (I definitely have enough chopped tomatoes too)
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Glad you liked it! 😊
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Yoh did that simplest of things, that we must ALL do…you showed, not told…so well done.
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Thank you. 😊
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