
All was calm and all was clean,
Jack’s trilby brushed, his shoes a-gleam.
Cheese and pickle wrapped to go,
all set to leave for the metro.
His family smiled, encouraging,
crossing fingers, everything.
The family cat seemed wishful too,
jumping up with furry mew.
But sadly, no, the cat’s intent
was the goldfish bowl’s contents,
and with a swoosh poor goldie poured
flapping onto the hall floor.
The trilby fell into the mess,
Jack’s shoes and socks were fully wet.
His suit was spattered with fish flakes,
his lunch got trodden in the wake.
His family gasped – calamity!
Jack’s longed-for job was not to be.
But wait, Jack spied an answer near,
he’d make his first day, never fear.
Some overalls hung on the wall,
snow boots stood by the front door.
Quickly changed, and off Jack sped,
a goldfish bowl upon his head.
Carrie’s photo prompt this weekend at the Sunday Muse blogspot is another quirky one. Had great fun with this. See the link at :http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/
Love the idea that the suit in the image is not what is truly seen. And the cat is probably snickering at the entire mess. 🙂
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I think I had Garfield in mind!
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This is such a delightful way to begin a rainy Autumn day ~~~ thank you!
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You are most welcome Helen 😊.
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LOL
this poem is Sunday tonic.
I’m good for today
Much💜love
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Pleased it hit the spot Gillena. 😁
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A lovely and creative description of the oddwalker’s suit!! Great fun.
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Pleased you enjoyed it!
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I absolutely love this Marion!!! Wonderful and delightful!!
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Thank you so much Carrie 😊. Photo brought out the silly in me!
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This was fun to read. Made me smile.
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Pleased to make you smile Sherry 😊.
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Marion I got a kick out of this. Reminds me of The Cat in the Hat. I hope he gets to keep his new job.
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Oh yes, another cat causing chaos!
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🙂
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Reimagined, and such a clever twist on the photo. Well-done.
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Thank you – it was a fun photo to use. 😊
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“and off Jack sped, / a goldfish bowl upon his head.” LOL! I especially loved “Cheese and pickle wrapped to go” wonderful detail.
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Cheese and pickle features quite a lot in my house!
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Feeling a bit silly today?? A clever post you wrote, I love the stories folk come up with.
I could help with some advice but I think sympathy would be better for this writer.
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Thank you Jim. Yes, I was feeling very silly 😁.
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