I hear whispers.
Mischief tells a dark tale.
It weaves cruel lies,
catching in the minds
of no better folk,
as potent as a curse to raise the dead,
which cannot be unsaid and never dies.
I hear whispers
as smoke coils in shadows.
No flame to lick me,
just the smart of tongues.
I feared this night would come as doors slam shut.
The wickedness of rumour spits and cries.
Lisa is on duty at the d’Verse Poets Pub and has set a spookily tricky challenge to write a duodora about an aspect of human behaviour irritating to us, and with a Halloween theme. https://dversepoets.com/2021/10/26/dverse-poetics-halloweeny-humans. Here is my attempt!
Great use of the form, and those whispers carry well the sense of a mundane evil that can be more frightening than anything supernatural.
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Thank you Joy π. Exactly, malicious gossip is definitely evil.
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The ‘smart of tongue’ … oh, how much it can damage. Well done!
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Thank you Helen π
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Ooh, I love what you came up with here, Marion. Favorite lines:
“I hear whispers
as smoke coils in shadows.
No flame to lick me,
just the smart of tongues.”
Ken wrote about those digging for skeletons in others’ closets and Ingrid and you are kindred spirits and despising gossipers. It’s a ghoulish practice that causes so much woe.
Love that you did it in duodora form. Candy corn bonus met!
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Candy corn gratefully received!
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It is hard to overcome or even combat the formless vapor of innuendo. Well written.
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‘Formless vapor of innuendo’ – ooh I like that. Thank you Rob.
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“No flame to lick me, just the smart of tongues,”.. this is soo potent! Brilliant response to the prompt π
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Thank you Sanaa π
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You’re most welcome ππ
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Whispers – sharp-tongued missiles inflicting famage wherever they land.
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Oh yes, love your metaphor! Thank you Bev. π
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Those whispers can be quite loud. Your poem flows beautifully too. (K)
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Thank you Kerfe π
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Beautifully done!
‘I hear whispers
as smoke coils in shadows.
No flame to lick me,
just the smart of tongues.’
Such rumours can be fatal. Suitably chilling!
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Thank you Ingrid! π
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“no flame to lick me .” gve me shivers thanks
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You’re welcome Rog π₯Ά! π
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Amazing form and message. Those cruel lies hurt!
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Thank you Grace! They do!
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An eloquent use of the form to spell out the destructive force of rumors. Love that last line especially, Marion, that captures in one rock-solid line all that comes before it.
pax,
dora
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Thank you so much Dora π.
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Nicely done, we can do without the gossipy gossipers
Happy you dropped by to read mine
Muchπlove
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Thank you Gillena π. Yes we can!
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