
I hear you in the budding bushes
and the sleeping beech,
playing your mellow flute of spring.
What do you see
with your yellow-kohled eyes,
tilting your head,
ebony feathers ready to catch the wind?
Was this a warning,
and not a song?
Bjorn is hosting at d’Verse tonight (https://dversepoets.com/2022/03/07/eyeing-the-quadrille-147/) asking us to write a quadrille to include the word ‘eye’. Here is my offering. For other responses to this lovely prompt visit the link above.
Beautifully described. I like the last line. Ominous, this one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you K. Birds are often seen as omens aren’t they?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed. I just never know which one is which. Might be best that way.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, you’re probably right!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely imagery.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
At first you see the bird looking then you see the bird “really” looking! Nice job with that imagery!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Christine! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sometimes, it could be a warning. I often ponder the messagener.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too. 😊
LikeLike
Love this, Marion, especially the “yellow-kohled eyes”! And yes, whi knows!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Punan, so pleased you like it 😊
LikeLike
I choose musician .. and a harbinger of Spring as well!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good choice Helen. Thank you for reading.😊
LikeLike
The last two lines really grabbed my attention. Sometimes what our eyes see betrays us. The bird imagery is excellent! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
The blackbird is still to come… and when the song fills our garden we know that it’s spring.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It can’t come soon enough 🌷 …
LikeLike
I love: yellow-kohled eyes. That question in the end gave me pause.. . but I am hopeful for the song of spring.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Grace. Me too. 😊
LikeLike
This really made me smile, Marion 🙂
-David
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person