
I watch as
Each grain glints its separate miniscule nub of time,
Running through our fingers,
Here and here, and now here,
Tumbling into the past at some time in the future.
Is there more grain in the past or in the future,
and how much is in the present?
And if there is less to hold onto in the present,
Our grasp weakening as joints stiffen and
Concentration fails,
What says that for holding onto love?
Our time will last but a moment.
But you sweep your hand across the sand,
Its quartz glinting in the blue sky light,
And smooth the mounds we had trickled there.
Perhaps we can stay forever now, you said,
And now, and now, and now.
Linking this to The Sunday Muse (http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/) and one of Carrie’s images for this week.
What an exquisite poem with a wonderful flow! The inclusion of present, past, and the future is just brilliant. Marion.
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Thank you Sunita! I see we went for the same image prompt. Loved your piece.
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Marion – I *love* the end of this poem in particular – that’s lovely!
❤
David
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Thank you so much David. So pleased you liked it!
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Your poem took my breath away … it is simply gorgeous!
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Helen, you are so kind. I am so very pleased it had that effect!
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You’ve made a tea moment. Fleeting and sad,but real beautiful.
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Thank you K! What a lovely compliment.
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🦋 You’re welcome
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I love the feelings and thoughts conveyed here Marion! So lovely, and the ending is wonderful!
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Thank you so much Carrie! The image cries for thoughts on Time doesn’t it?
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I like the three now’s . It can never happen though. Flowing sand will not allow it
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Thank you Larry. (I end up in knots thinking about time. I believe Eternalism proposes past, present and future all exist equally – so, anything is possible …?)
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In my old age, there is definitely more grain in the past. I so love your closing lines………
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Thank you Sherry! What I love about poetry, is we can imagine any ending we like …
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I love this poem, Marion! A grain of sand, a moment in time. Great ending on this.
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Thank you so much! That’s lovely to hear.
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