
I often elope these days,
Creaking the back window open
And jumping as lightly as my years allow
Onto the weedy flower bed.
Gretna Green is so far, though,
And my resolve peters out
When my hitching thumb proves useless.
My hips grate, rather than grind,
And the thoughts I was escaping from
Begin to seem less insufferable
Than the devil I don’t know.
And lately, I’ve noticed,
You’re waiting for me at home.
Where were you? I ask,
Pretending you’re the reason I came back,
Not the reason I left.
Another write on the theme of ‘the Mind’.
Oh I had to laugh out loud at the ‘hips grating’ … mine do, my shoulders do, my knees creak. Well done.
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Thank you Helen. Yes, my body definitely makes more noise than it used to!
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The ending as that twist of knife. Well done. And I love the idea of eloping the day.l, better than sucker punching as I’ve been doing. 😂
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Thank you K. Sometimes I would like a break from myself …😄
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I seriously LOVE this, Marion.
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David, thank you so much!
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