
Above, an infinity of blue –
deep and still and featureless.
Until,
a distant tchacking heralds a tide of jackdaws,
spiralling in a whirlpool of flight,
a helix of black morse code,
dots and dashes revealing
the invisible,
like dust brushed onto fingerprints,
nature’s imagers.
Linking this to The Sunday Muse Blogspot, where Carrie is focussing on all things feathered this week. http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/. After seeing the prompt, I sat outside in the shade with my coffee and saw a swathe of hundreds of jackdaws overhead. They caught a thermal and twirled higher and higher. It was wonderful to watch.
gosh – this is so good Marion… this image was my second choice, BTW 😀
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Thank you so much David!
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I love this. Wonderfully graphic.
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Thank you Margaret 😊 (Hope your train journey went ok btw).
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Lots of air con, on time. Just fine thanks!
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👍
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I could visualise it as I read. Delightful.
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So pleased to hear that Keith. Thank you.
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I love the “tchaking” – I can almost hear them through that word.
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It was quite a chorus! Thank you Sherry.
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Whoa! What’s spiraling here is your amazing metaphors!
–Shay
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Thank you Shay!
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Great line: “a helix of black morse code”
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Thank you Lisa -😊
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You’re very welcome!
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That last line is utterly stunning Marion! This poem is a delight to read, truly wonderful!!
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Carrie, thank you! Wonderful images again ❤
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spiralling in a whirlpool of flight,”
Luv that line
Happy Sunday. Thanks for dropping by my blog.
Much💖love
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Thank you Gillena. Hope your Sunday was a happy one too ❤
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When meaningful experience morphs into lovely poetry … we are all winners.
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This makes me smile – what a lovely way to put it. Thank you Helen.
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Just maybe if we are open enough, full of enough wonder, we can learn that Morse code. I feel a bit lighter after reading this poem.
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Susie, that’s so lovely to hear. Thank you.
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