
She sings her tale as lyrically as any opera.
From the mountains, where breath is ice and air is thin,
she skips an elaborate path,
a trilling coloratura over rocks as worn as time.
Distracted on her way by willowed inlets
and the bel canto of romantic wallows
where love is lost and found
and lost again.
Until the grand finale –
that final leap into clouded oblivion –
as her aria lifts higher than a falcon
before she succumbs,
her fate written,
falling to a clash of cymbals
and the crash of rapturous applause.
Linking this to The Sunday Muse Blog spot (http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/) where Carrie supplied this fabulous image and Sammi’s Weekend Word Prompts (https://sammiscribbles.wordpress.com/2022/08/27/weekend-writing-prompt-274-opera/) where we are invited to write 95 words exactly and include the word ‘opera’.
(NB: A Falcon soprano has a deeper register than a Coloratura soprano).
Very dramatic mood. Enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine.
Muchπlove
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Thank you Gillena β€
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Very clever! An amusing re-imagining of this waterfall’s performance.
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Thank you Margaret!
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Love all the sonics in this write π
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Thank you Sunra π
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Gorgeous.
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Thank you so much π
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Absolutely beautiful, and a perfect accompaniment to the picture!
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Thank you so much Keith π
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Enjoyed this musical interlude very much…great prompt. !
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So pleased to hear that. Thank you Rall π
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An enjoyable adventure read of a famed performer.
I’m not very musically talented, I’ve been asked to not sing in a church choir.
Also, if you do try not to stand too close to the cymbals.
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Me neither Jim. π
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This is such an elegant and enchanting piece Marion. Really enjoyed it β wonderful. πβπΌ
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Thank you so much Rob!
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Love the lyrical theme this holds my friend. Truly lovely!
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Carrie, Thank you! π
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This is so clever, and musical!
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Thank you π
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I enjoyed the way this built up to its climax and then released. It’s a powerful metaphor!
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Thank you so much Lisa. I love the image Carrie supplied.
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Love this, music is the perfect interpretation of the image.
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Susie, Thank you!
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